Nice gasida

But I think that there are some lines might be written in a different way to make the expressions stronger

here are some suggestions


"expressing about my feel " to be expressing my feelings .Because feel is a verb and its noun is feeling

"I did - for it - all thing" to be i have done everything

"Expand even you are king" to be even if you are a king

"land" to be earth

hope that my ideas will be helpful

with my respect