falling leaves

peace upon you all

i wrote this gasida earlier .. hoping you enjoy reading it
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They were just falling
with the breath of angry wind
carrying my thoughts...my hopes
brittle as i am
weak as i do
covering the earth with dead lives

The shiny green turns to yellow
turns to ... colourless
trying vainly to avoid wind
that enjoy being the master
enjoy breaking slaves will

Struggling to stay there...
for just being among those feet...
with no pain.. in one piece..
is the nonsensical dream

They were still falling
with the breath of angry wind
hoping as i do
dreaming as i do
just to be alive....

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

الاخ الفاضله سنبله

i did enjoy reading it

life it self is like an falling leaves

but never mind the angry wind

by faith and patience u can fly
aganist evey distracting wind

i would like to see more of ur gasidas

A good gasida. Sensational and full of emotional thrust.
You need only to survive!
I hope you will be encouraged to have more strength to live the breath of the strong wind. Good luck & nice wishes.