Tomorrow And Today

Tomorrow And Today


Tomorrow Will Come, Today Will Go;
And Sun Will Shine To Break The Dark;
Also The Rain Will Come To Grow;
The Rose Which Lives In Lovely Park.

Tomorrow Will Give The Light To Heart;
To See The World With Shiny Eye;
To Go On Way Of Hopes And Art;
To Live , To Love , To Dream And Fly.

Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today;
But Lives As Long As Him In Life;
He Gives A Chance To Start The Way;
Or Puts A Stop To Train Of Life.

If Catch Today And Wait For Tomorrow;
Will Lose Today And Also Tomorrow.


Written By: Marwan Al-mezaini. 1415 Ah

we MAY NEVER SEE TOMORROW
THERE’S NO WRITTEN GUARANTEE
AND THINGS THAT HAPPENED YESTERDAY
BELONG TO HISTORY

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We CANNOT PREDICT THE FUTURE
We CANNOT CHANGE THE PAST
We HAVE JUST THE PRESENT MOMENT
We MUST TREAT IT AS OurLAST

Dear brother:

whats a wonderful word ...

sweet meaning

thank you and with my bestWishes

nice to see you here

thanks for passing

my regard

تقبل تشجيعي أخي مروان.


تحياتي

شكراً جزيلاً أخي وأستاذي سمير على التشجيع..

تقبل تحيتي..

وكل عام وأنتم بخير ..

بمناسبة العام الهجري الجديد ..

كل عام وأنت بخير

wonderfull pome. Full of hope and wisdem thaks for making my day a batter one today

My dear : Marwan Al-mezaini

Let me express about my opinion on your sonnet

I think you know what I mean when I said sonnet

The sonnet is a poetry which is formed from fourteen lines

In addition the rhyme and rhythm

About your sonnet

It has more punctuations and its rhyme scheme is very straightforward

You have a good imagery here


Also The Rain Will Come To Grow;
The Rose Which Lives In Lovely Park


But you have some grammatical mistakes here

But Lives As Long As Him In Life;
He Gives A Chance To Start The Way

Instead of Him you should but pronoun It

And also In second line remove He and but It

because Him refers to persons

Also He refers to persons

And in your sonnet no mentioned persons

Eventually, thank you for this beautiful gasida

Keep it up

Your small brother : Hamoud

الأستاذة عبلة زقزوق ..

أشكر لك تواصلك وكلماتك ..

تحيتي

الأستاذ حمود الشمري ..

أسعدني تواجدك وملاحظتك ..

ولكن هناك ما يسمى بـ ( التشخيص ) في اللغة وهو اعتبار الجماد إنسان ..

يمكنك البحث عن ذلك للإستفادة في علوم الأدب ..

أكرر شكري وامتناني لك ..

تحيتي