Tomorrow And Today

I admired your choice of title
who knows if tommorrow comes
and how much high is our expectation
thanx brother Marwan

Dear my sister Lamya

I have read your words with full of happiness

Thanks alot

Accept my regard

Mr. Marwan Mezaini ……………Peace be upon you

Your gasida is of a great value because it

expresses a lofty theme in a singularly beautiful

way. Everyone must exerts his/her effort in order to

make his/her future better than his/her present as

well as his past and this is typical of a true Muslim

who never stops trying to rise highly to gain heavenly

values and the everlasting happiness

I think that the gasida begins with two memorable

lines . It arouses an optimistic feeling and that

makes it flows smoothly from the beginning to end.Its

images are lively and lovely

The reader can see through the visual imagery in the

last three lines of the first stanza the shining sun and

its light when penetrating the darkness of the night .

He can also see the beauty of the rose and the ' lovely

garden .'Through the olfactory imagery , the reader can

feel the sweet smell of the rose and garden

In the second and third stanzas ,the metaphor is

extended . Tomorrow is compared to an honest

person who has an insight .He enlightens anyone

who wants to fulfill his ambitions and dreams . He

cheers one up and never makes one give up hope ; he

assures him that he has another chance to plan for a

better future so as to get rid of the depressing

experiences of the past

The gasida has (the Shakespearean rhyme scheme

abab,cdcd,efef,gg) .The main idea lies in the last two

lines .If one does not benefit from his present time that

allows him to think of the things he wants to achieve ,

he will undoubtedly gain nothing

Mr. Al -Mezaini , I really enjoyed reading this gasida.

It made me remember nostalgically my college days,

my best literature teachers whom I deeply respect .It

also reminded me of my friends and ………my

cherished hopes ,dreams, memories

May Allah bless you and keep you guided on the path of His
righteous servants

Mr. Marwan Mezaini ……………Peace be upon you


Your gasida is of a great value because it

expresses a lofty theme in a singularly beautiful

way. Everyone must exerts his/her effort in order to

make his/her future better than his/her present as

well as his past and this is typical of a true Muslim

who never stops trying to rise highly to gain heavenly

values and the everlasting happiness

I think that the gasida begins with two memorable

lines . It arouses an optimistic feeling and that

makes it flows smoothly from the beginning to end.Its

images are lively and lovely

The reader can see through the visual imagery in the

last three lines of the first stanza the shining sun and

its light when penetrating the darkness of the night .

He can also see the beauty of the rose and the ' lovely

garden .'Through the olfactory imagery , the reader can

feel the sweet smell of the rose and garden

In the second and third stanzas ,the metaphor is

extended . Tomorrow is compared to an honest

person who has an insight .He enlightens anyone

who wants to fulfill his ambitions and dreams . He

cheers one up and never makes one give up hope ; he

assures him that he has another chance to plan for a

better future so as to get rid of the depressing

experiences of the past

The gasida has (the Shakespearean rhyme scheme

abab,cdcd,efef,gg) .The main idea lies in the last two

lines .If one does not benefit from his present time that

allows him to think of the things he wants to achieve ,

he will undoubtedly gain nothing

Mr. Al -Mezaini , I really enjoyed reading this gasida.

It made me remember nostalgically my college days,

my best literature teachers whom I deeply respect .It

also reminded me of my friends and ………my

cherished hopes ,dreams, memories

May Allah bless you and keep you guided on the path of His
righteous servants

My great sister Thuraia Ad-Dowsary ..

Realy I don not find the wors that could express my feelings about what you have written here.
Thanks alot form my deep heart.

Accept my regard.

Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today


This line says a lot of things

keep going

my regards

نص جميل مروان المزيني

وحس بهي مدهش

دمت بألق

Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today


This line says a lot of things

keep going

my regards

Dear Hana

Peace be upon U

Hi

You R right

Accept my regard

Thanks

نص جميل مروان المزيني

وحس بهي مدهش

دمت بألق

الشاعرة الكبيرة ربيحة الرفاعي

أسعدني حضورك هنا

وأسعدتني كلماتك

أشكر لك ذلك بكل الود ..

تحيتي