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الموضوع: falling leaves

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    الصورة الرمزية بثينة محمود أديبة
    تاريخ التسجيل : Jul 2003
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    افتراضي falling leaves

    peace upon you all

    i wrote this gasida earlier .. hoping you enjoy reading it
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    They were just falling
    with the breath of angry wind
    carrying my thoughts...my hopes
    brittle as i am
    weak as i do
    covering the earth with dead lives

    The shiny green turns to yellow
    turns to ... colourless
    trying vainly to avoid wind
    that enjoy being the master
    enjoy breaking slaves will

    Struggling to stay there...
    for just being among those feet...
    with no pain.. in one piece..
    is the nonsensical dream

    They were still falling
    with the breath of angry wind
    hoping as i do
    dreaming as i do
    just to be alive....

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    شاعر
    تاريخ التسجيل : May 2003
    الدولة : الخبر
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    افتراضي

    A good gasida. Sensational and full of emotional thrust.
    You need only to survive!
    I hope you will be encouraged to have more strength to live the breath of the strong wind. Good luck & nice wishes.
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي