I admired your choice of title
who knows if tommorrow comes
and how much high is our expectation
thanx brother Marwan
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I admired your choice of title
who knows if tommorrow comes
and how much high is our expectation
thanx brother Marwan
زيزفون
Dear my sister Lamya
I have read your words with full of happiness
Thanks alot
Accept my regard
إني شربتُ هواكِ منذ طفولتي=حتى ارتويتُ وبحتُ في الكراس ِ
Mr. Marwan Mezaini ……………Peace be upon you
Your gasida is of a great value because it
expresses a lofty theme in a singularly beautiful
way. Everyone must exerts his/her effort in order to
make his/her future better than his/her present as
well as his past and this is typical of a true Muslim
who never stops trying to rise highly to gain heavenly
values and the everlasting happiness
I think that the gasida begins with two memorable
lines . It arouses an optimistic feeling and that
makes it flows smoothly from the beginning to end.Its
images are lively and lovely
The reader can see through the visual imagery in the
last three lines of the first stanza the shining sun and
its light when penetrating the darkness of the night .
He can also see the beauty of the rose and the ' lovely
garden .'Through the olfactory imagery , the reader can
feel the sweet smell of the rose and garden
In the second and third stanzas ,the metaphor is
extended . Tomorrow is compared to an honest
person who has an insight .He enlightens anyone
who wants to fulfill his ambitions and dreams . He
cheers one up and never makes one give up hope ; he
assures him that he has another chance to plan for a
better future so as to get rid of the depressing
experiences of the past
The gasida has (the Shakespearean rhyme scheme
abab,cdcd,efef,gg) .The main idea lies in the last two
lines .If one does not benefit from his present time that
allows him to think of the things he wants to achieve ,
he will undoubtedly gain nothing
Mr. Al -Mezaini , I really enjoyed reading this gasida.
It made me remember nostalgically my college days,
my best literature teachers whom I deeply respect .It
also reminded me of my friends and ………my
cherished hopes ,dreams, memories
May Allah bless you and keep you guided on the path of His
righteous servants
Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today
This line says a lot of things
keep going
my regards