Nothing in my hand

[حمود الشمري]

I have exam tomorrow

and I wrote this small gasida expressing about my feel :009: :

Nothing in my hand
I did - for it - all thing

Every one on the land
Should feel upset and boring

Our griefs day after day expand
Expand even you are king

Eventually, don't refuse my demand ;
Face your live and sing


:noc:

[الصباح الخالدي]

gooooood morning 7mwd
i hope you think my heart see
no boudy her

[أحمد فؤاد]

nice words , but don't use this principle in the exam , means don't face the tension of the exam with singing in the exam room D:


i wish the best for you in exam :001:


Ahmad Fouad

[سحر الليالي]

dear brother: :

Thank you for this lovely and sadly song :0014:

Can i sing with you ??? I feel like you ,and i got an exam and i dont no what to do....so please let me song with you :009::008:

your sis:

sahar

[حمود الشمري]

gooooood morning 7mwd
i hope you think my heart see
no boudy her

?I hope also what do you mean by your reply

thank you

:0014:

[محمد سمير السحار]

I have exam tomorrow

and I wrote this small gasida expressing about my feel :009: :

Nothing in my hand
I did - for it - all thing

Every one on the land
Should feel upset and boring

Our griefs day after day expand
Expand even you are king

Eventually, don't refuse my demand ;
Face your live and sing


:noc:
حمود الشمري Dear my brother
It is a nice gasida
It has a good aim
thank you for it
Accept my best regards
Your brother
Mohammed Samir

[حمود الشمري]

nice words , but don't use this principle in the exam , means don't face the tension of the exam with singing in the exam room D:


i wish the best for you in exam :001:


Ahmad Fouad

In the exam

:008:

don't remember me

In the exam I can just write

even the question sometimes is not allowed

D:

how can I sing there :hat:


thank you Ahmad for your good reply

:0014:

[حمود الشمري]

dear brother: :

Thank you for this lovely and sadly song :0014:

Can i sing with you ??? I feel like you ,and i got an exam and i dont no what to do....so please let me song with you :009::008:

your sis:

sahar


sure you can but bring with you tool of the songs

D:

I hope you to get good marks in your exam

thank you Sa7ar for your beautiful reply

:0014:

[حمود الشمري]

حمود الشمري Dear my brother
It is a nice gasida
It has a good aim
thank you for it
Accept my best regards
Your brother
Mohammed Samir

It's nice from your good replying

and your passing from here

thank you brother

:0014:

[ربيحة الرفاعي]

That gasida is five years old now
you are supposed to have passed your stage exams
arrived at some harbor of your dreams

where are you now??

[صفاء الزرقان]

Nice gasida

But I think that there are some lines might be written in a different way to make the expressions stronger

here are some suggestions


"expressing about my feel " to be expressing my feelings .Because feel is a verb and its noun is feeling

"I did - for it - all thing" to be i have done everything

"Expand even you are king" to be even if you are a king

"land" to be earth

hope that my ideas will be helpful

with my respect