The ink is coming dry

[سماح محمد]

I used to write words, to express my feeling toward you
But now, the words couldn’t be written
The ink is coming dry, while my tears is showing up

Missing you as a part of my life is so miserable
Knowing that you are not near is so deplorable

One day, you told me: I love you
But I am telling you: all the days, I am loving you

[ربيحة الرفاعي]

أيتها الرقيقة العذبة الحرف
بمهارة عدت خيلك هنا
وبروعة رسمت الحرف ... فلا جف حبرك يوما

دمت بألق

[نداء غريب صبري]

I'll repeat your words

Missing you as a part of my life is so miserable
Knowing that you are not near is so deplorable

One day, you told me: I love you
But I am telling you
all the days I am loving you

[رفعت زيتون]

..


remembering ,
the days and nights
and I am asking why
?

the bird has left the tree
but couldn't fly
.

isn't it a reason
to make the eyes cry
?
......

Smah
you are so great
.

[ربيحة الرفاعي]

..
the bird has left the tree
but couldn't fly
.
isn't it a reason
to make the eyes cry?
.




God
this is wonderfull

Ref'at....

Is it yours
??

[صفاء الزرقان]

the bird has left the tree"
but couldn't fly
.
isn't it a reason
to make the eyes cry?"
your words Mr.Refaat remind me of an English gasida where the writer describes his love as a bird standing on his window he cant come near the bird so it may fly and go away ,and at the same time he cant go away and leave the bird alone so the best thing to do is to stay in his place and do not move
nice words Mr. R
efaat

[صفاء الزرقان]

Great words and strong expressions your gasida is so emotional
The last two lines in your gasida are so real and show the difference between the man and the woman in the relationship , she always shows her emotions while he doesn't show them always for her.
But dear I think that if you use the word "once" instead of "one day" your expressions will be stronger , and I think that "once" is the best word to be used in such situations in the English language.
May God bless you dear