Tomorrow And Today

[مروان المزيني]

Tomorrow And Today


Tomorrow Will Come, Today Will Go;
And Sun Will Shine To Break The Dark;
Also The Rain Will Come To Grow;
The Rose Which Lives In Lovely Park.

Tomorrow Will Give The Light To Heart;
To See The World With Shiny Eye;
To Go On Way Of Hopes And Art;
To Live , To Love , To Dream And Fly.

Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today;
But Lives As Long As Him In Life;
He Gives A Chance To Start The Way;
Or Puts A Stop To Train Of Life.

If Catch Today And Wait For Tomorrow;
Will Lose Today And Also Tomorrow.


Written By: Marwan Al-mezaini. 1415 Ah

[سحر الليالي]

we MAY NEVER SEE TOMORROW
THERE’S NO WRITTEN GUARANTEE
AND THINGS THAT HAPPENED YESTERDAY
BELONG TO HISTORY

***
We CANNOT PREDICT THE FUTURE
We CANNOT CHANGE THE PAST
We HAVE JUST THE PRESENT MOMENT
We MUST TREAT IT AS OurLAST

Dear brother:

whats a wonderful word ...

sweet meaning

thank you and with my bestWishes

[مروان المزيني]

nice to see you here

thanks for passing

my regard

[د. سمير العمري]

تقبل تشجيعي أخي مروان.


تحياتي
:os::tree::os:

[مروان المزيني]

شكراً جزيلاً أخي وأستاذي سمير على التشجيع..

تقبل تحيتي..

وكل عام وأنتم بخير ..

[مروان المزيني]

بمناسبة العام الهجري الجديد ..

كل عام وأنت بخير

[عبلة محمد زقزوق]

wonderfull pome. Full of hope and wisdem thaks for making my day a batter one today

[حمود الشمري]

My dear : Marwan Al-mezaini

Let me express about my opinion on your sonnet

I think you know what I mean when I said sonnet

The sonnet is a poetry which is formed from fourteen lines

In addition the rhyme and rhythm

About your sonnet

It has more punctuations and its rhyme scheme is very straightforward

You have a good imagery here


Also The Rain Will Come To Grow;
The Rose Which Lives In Lovely Park


But you have some grammatical mistakes here

But Lives As Long As Him In Life;
He Gives A Chance To Start The Way

Instead of Him you should but pronoun It

And also In second line remove He and but It

because Him refers to persons

Also He refers to persons

And in your sonnet no mentioned persons

Eventually, thank you for this beautiful gasida

Keep it up

Your small brother : Hamoud

:001:

[مروان المزيني]

الأستاذة عبلة زقزوق ..

أشكر لك تواصلك وكلماتك ..

تحيتي

[مروان المزيني]

الأستاذ حمود الشمري ..

أسعدني تواجدك وملاحظتك ..

ولكن هناك ما يسمى بـ ( التشخيص ) في اللغة وهو اعتبار الجماد إنسان ..

يمكنك البحث عن ذلك للإستفادة في علوم الأدب ..

أكرر شكري وامتناني لك ..

تحيتي

[لمياء سليمان]

I admired your choice of title
who knows if tommorrow comes
and how much high is our expectation
thanx brother Marwan

[مروان المزيني]

Dear my sister Lamya

I have read your words with full of happiness

Thanks alot

Accept my regard

[ثريا الدوسري]

Mr. Marwan Mezaini ……………Peace be upon you


Your gasida is of a great value because it

expresses a lofty theme in a singularly beautiful

way. Everyone must exerts his/her effort in order to

make his/her future better than his/her present as

well as his past and this is typical of a true Muslim

who never stops trying to rise highly to gain heavenly

values and the everlasting happiness


I think that the gasida begins with two memorable

lines . It arouses an optimistic feeling and that

makes it flows smoothly from the beginning to end.Its

images are lively and lovely


The reader can see through the visual imagery in the

last three lines of the first stanza the shining sun and

its light when penetrating the darkness of the night .

He can also see the beauty of the rose and the ' lovely

garden .'Through the olfactory imagery , the reader can

feel the sweet smell of the rose and garden


In the second and third stanzas ,the metaphor is

extended . Tomorrow is compared to an honest

person who has an insight .He enlightens anyone

who wants to fulfill his ambitions and dreams . He

cheers one up and never makes one give up hope ; he

assures him that he has another chance to plan for a

better future so as to get rid of the depressing

experiences of the past


The gasida has (the Shakespearean rhyme scheme



abab,cdcd,efef,gg) .The main idea lies in the last two

lines .If one does not benefit from his present time that

allows him to think of the things he wants to achieve ,

he will undoubtedly gain nothing


Mr. Al -Mezaini , I really enjoyed reading this gasida.

It made me remember nostalgically my college days,

my best literature teachers whom I deeply respect .It

also reminded me of my friends and ………my

cherished hopes ,dreams, memories



May Allah bless you and keep you guided on the path of His
righteous servants

[مروان المزيني]

Mr. Marwan Mezaini ……………Peace be upon you


Your gasida is of a great value because it


expresses a lofty theme in a singularly beautiful


way. Everyone must exerts his/her effort in order to


make his/her future better than his/her present as


well as his past and this is typical of a true Muslim


who never stops trying to rise highly to gain heavenly


values and the everlasting happiness

I think that the gasida begins with two memorable


lines . It arouses an optimistic feeling and that


makes it flows smoothly from the beginning to end.Its


images are lively and lovely

The reader can see through the visual imagery in the


last three lines of the first stanza the shining sun and


its light when penetrating the darkness of the night .


He can also see the beauty of the rose and the ' lovely


garden .'Through the olfactory imagery , the reader can


feel the sweet smell of the rose and garden

In the second and third stanzas ,the metaphor is


extended . Tomorrow is compared to an honest


person who has an insight .He enlightens anyone


who wants to fulfill his ambitions and dreams . He


cheers one up and never makes one give up hope ; he


assures him that he has another chance to plan for a


better future so as to get rid of the depressing


experiences of the past

The gasida has (the Shakespearean rhyme scheme




abab,cdcd,efef,gg) .The main idea lies in the last two



lines .If one does not benefit from his present time that


allows him to think of the things he wants to achieve ,


he will undoubtedly gain nothing


Mr. Al -Mezaini , I really enjoyed reading this gasida.


It made me remember nostalgically my college days,


my best literature teachers whom I deeply respect .It


also reminded me of my friends and ………my


cherished hopes ,dreams, memories



May Allah bless you and keep you guided on the path of His
righteous servants




My great sister Thuraia Ad-Dowsary ..

Realy I don not find the wors that could express my feelings about what you have written here.
Thanks alot form my deep heart.

Accept my regard.

[هناء الشوافي]

Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today


This line says a lot of things

keep going

my regards

[ربيحة الرفاعي]

نص جميل مروان المزيني

وحس بهي مدهش

دمت بألق

[مروان المزيني]

Tomorrow Is Younger Than Today


This line says a lot of things

keep going

my regards

Dear Hana

Peace be upon U

Hi

You R right

Accept my regard

Thanks

[مروان المزيني]

نص جميل مروان المزيني

وحس بهي مدهش

دمت بألق

الشاعرة الكبيرة ربيحة الرفاعي

أسعدني حضورك هنا

وأسعدتني كلماتك

أشكر لك ذلك بكل الود ..

تحيتي