My dear : Marwan Al-mezaini
Let me express about my opinion on your sonnet
I think you know what I mean when I said sonnet
The sonnet is a poetry which is formed from fourteen lines
In addition the rhyme and rhythm
About your sonnet
It has more punctuations and its rhyme scheme is very straightforward
You have a good imagery here
Also The Rain Will Come To Grow;
The Rose Which Lives In Lovely Park
But you have some grammatical mistakes here
But Lives As Long As Him In Life;
He Gives A Chance To Start The Way
Instead of Him you should but pronoun It
And also In second line remove He and but It
because Him refers to persons
Also He refers to persons
And in your sonnet no mentioned persons
Eventually, thank you for this beautiful gasida
Keep it up
Your small brother : Hamoud