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الموضوع: The ink is coming dry

  1. #1
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      افتراضي The ink is coming dry

      I used to write words, to express my feeling toward you
      But now, the words couldn’t be written
      The ink is coming dry, while my tears is showing up

      Missing you as a part of my life is so miserable
      Knowing that you are not near is so deplorable

      One day, you told me: I love you
      But I am telling you: all the days, I am loving you

    • #2
      من مواضيعي

        افتراضي

        أيتها الرقيقة العذبة الحرف
        بمهارة عدت خيلك هنا
        وبروعة رسمت الحرف ... فلا جف حبرك يوما

        دمت بألق
        تستطيع أن ترى الصورة بحجمها الطبيعي بعد الضغط عليها

      • #3
        من مواضيعي

          افتراضي

          I'll repeat your words

          Missing you as a part of my life is so miserable
          Knowing that you are not near is so deplorable

          One day, you told me: I love you
          But I am telling you
          all the days I am loving you

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        • #5
          من مواضيعي

            افتراضي

            اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رفعت زيتون مشاهدة المشاركة
            ..
            the bird has left the tree
            but couldn't fly
            .
            isn't it a reason
            to make the eyes cry?
            .


            God
            this is wonderfull

            Ref'at....

            Is it yours
            ??

          • #6
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              افتراضي

              the bird has left the tree"
              but couldn't fly
              .
              isn't it a reason
              to make the eyes cry?"
              your words Mr.Refaat remind me of an English gasida where the writer describes his love as a bird standing on his window he cant come near the bird so it may fly and go away ,and at the same time he cant go away and leave the bird alone so the best thing to do is to stay in his place and do not move
              nice words Mr. Refaat

            • #7
              من مواضيعي

                افتراضي

                Great words and strong expressions your gasida is so emotional
                The last two lines in your gasida are so real and show the difference between the man and the woman in the relationship , she always shows her emotions while he doesn't show them always for her.
                But dear I think that if you use the word "once" instead of "one day" your expressions will be stronger , and I think that "once" is the best word to be used in such situations in the English language.
                May God bless you dear